usse aadat thi | By Tanvi

usse aadat thi | By Tanvi

Woh mere har jhoot se khush hota,
Jise hamesha sach bolne ki aadat thi,

Woh ek aanso bhi girne per khafa hota tha,
Jise tantai mein rone ki aadat thi,

Woh kehta tha ke mujhe bhool jaye ga,
Jise meri har baat yaad rakhne ki aadat thi,

Hamesha maafi mangne ke gar se
Roz galtiyan kerna us ki aadat thi,

Woh jo dil o jaan nichaver kerta tha mujh per,
Magar choti si baat per rothna us ki aadat thi,

Hum us ke saath chal diye yeh jante huwe bhi,
Raah mein har ek ko chor dena us ki aadat thi,

Titliyon ko pakarna us ki aadat thi,
Har ek se larna us ki aadat thi…!!!!!!

By : Tanvi

30 Comments
  1. HI TANVI UR COLLECTIONS ARE NICE, CAN I GET SOMETHING FROM UR COLLECTION WHICH IS LIKE THIS:
    MERI AUR UNKI SIRF ITNI SI KHANI HAI
    EK TUTI HUI KASHTI HAI AUR BARISH KA PAANI HAI…….

  2. Hi Heeren

    Chalo yaar aur koi nahi likhta
    to main hi kuch likh deta hoon
    to shaid tab doosron ko khyal aaye.
    ========================
    Hum jal kar bhi roshni phailaate rahe,
    Isliye log hume jalaate rahe,
    Mere jalne ko kisi ne dekha hi nahi,
    Meri roshni pe sab mushkuraate rahe.
    =========================
    khalid.m@hotmail.co.uk
    =========================

  3. HI friends ,

    are yare sab kaha chalke gaye . no comments here since looooong haa

  4. Tum bin jiya jaye kaise, kaise jiya jaye tum bin
    Sadiyon se lambi hai raten, Sadiyon se lambe hue din

    ajao lotkar tum, ye dil keh raha hai
    tum bin jiya jaye kaise , kaise jiya jaye tum bin

    Fir sahmey tanhai jagi , fir yaad tum aa rahe ho
    fir jaan nikalne lagi hai, fir mujhko tadpa rahe ho

    Ajao lotkar tum , ye dil keh raha hai
    Tum bin jiya jaye kaise , kaise jiya jaye tum

    Rahon main yadon ke maile hain
    Tum bin bahut hum akele hain

    Aajao lotkar tum ye dil keh raha hai.
    Tum bin jiya jaye kaise, kaise jiya jaye tum bin

    ajao lotkar tum ye dil keh raha hai……….

    From
    Naresh Tanwar

  5. some gud collection there…

  6. Kisi khush nigah si ankh nay yeh kamal mujh per karam kia
    Meri loo ho jaan per raqam kia

    Who jo chand sa harf tha
    Who jo shaam sa naam tha

    Who jo ek phool si baat phirti thi dar badar
    Usay gulistan ka pata diya

    Mera dil kay shehray malal tha
    Usay roshni mai basa diya

  7. Sabhi udaas mausam hain, kabhi to milnay chalay aao.
    Dukhon mai hum to gum hain, kabhi to milnay chalay aao.

    Tumharay bad kaise raunaqain is dil ki nagri main,
    Sabhi charagh madham hain, kabhi to milnay chalay aao.

    Tumharay pass to hoon gi zamanay bhar ki khushian,
    Humaray pass to ghum hain, kabhi to milnay chalay aao.

    Tumhari yaad dil ko both takleef deti hai,
    Negahain bhi to purnum hain, kabhi to milnay chalay aao.

    Lagay hain zakham kitnay bay baha dil pa mohabbat main,
    Tumharay lafz marham hain, kabhi to milnay chalay aao.

    Both hum dard hain yun to hamaray bhi zamanay main,
    Magar phir bhi both kam hain, kabhi to milnay chalay aao.

    Yeh pathar hi na ho jain negahain dekhtay rasta,
    Kay khushian bhi to berham hain kabhi to milnay chalay aao

  8. hi tanvi
    ur poetry is very nice
    i really appriciate u aur RAJ nay jo jokes send kiye hain woh bhi boht achay hain

  9. Very NiCe……..,;./

  10. Jab teri dhun mein jiya kartey they,
    Hum bhi chup-chaap phira kartey they

  11. Badal sa gaya kuch, na rahe ab wo hum
    Kho gaye khayal, toot gayi hai qalam
    Chalte chalte liya waqt ne yoon mod
    Ja rahe the kahin, chal diye kahin hum
    Na kehne ko kuch, na sunne ki khwahish
    Har jazbe se khaali jaise ab hue hum
    Askhon ka samundar ufan raha hai dil main
    Khusk hain lekin, nahin hain aankhen nam
    Kho rahe hain purane, jud rahe naye rishte
    Waqt de raha hai ek naye insaan ko janam !!!!!!!!!

  12. HI TANVI …………..I HAVE NO WORDS BUT UR JUST ….MINDBLOWING

  13. massoom mohabbat ka bas itna fasana hai, kagaz ki kasti hai baris ka zamana hai….
    kya rasme mohabbat, kya rasme zamana hai,awaz bhi zakhmi hai or geet bhi gana hai……….
    us pr utrne ki ummid bahut km hai kasti bhi purani hai tufa ko bhi ana hai………
    samjhe ya na samjhe vo andaz mohabbat ke ek saksh ko ankho se ek sher sunana hai…….
    bholi si ada koi phir ishq ki zid pr hai, phir aag ka dariya hai or doob kr jana hai…………..

  14. shaam hothi hai thu ashko se jalathi hai chiraagh
    subah hothi hai thu daman se bujathi hai chiraagh
    ak hum hai ke abbhi tak hai diyee se mehroom
    ak woh hai ke chiraaghoo se jalathi hai chiraagh…

  15. so beautyful poetry

  16. hi yuvraj

    this r not written by me

    this r jus my collection….

  17. Pal pal tarse us pal ke liye
    pal aya bhi to kuch pal ke liye
    socha tha usse zindagi ka
    Ek haseen pal bana lenge
    wo pal ruka bhi to ek pal ke liye

  18. Hi Tanvi…
    I was so much pleased to read your shayri. I am myself very good in shayri but you… you are really great, having such a lovely heart….
    “Arzoo nahein dour se dekhne ki, pass aana bhi nahein chahta!
    Tamana nahein tum ko paane ki ,par tum ko khona bhi nahein chahta”

  19. Zindagi Main Hai Dhoka Is Ke Siwa Kuch Nahi
    Tamashaei Hai Yeh Dunya Is Ke Siwa Kuch Nahi

    Meri Zindagi Se Pochiye Zindagi Kia Hai
    Zindagi Hai Aik Khuwaab Is Ke Siwa Kuch Nahi

    Khushiyan Hain Lakhon Is Dunya Main Magar
    Udasi Hai Mere Dil Main Is Ke Siwa Kuch Nahi

    Mujh Se Jo Log Bhi Mile Hain Khush Hokar
    In k Dilon Main Hai Nafrat Ke Siwa Kuch Nahi

    Wade,Karte Hai Log Magar Jante Nahi Wafa Karna
    Bewafai Hey Is Dunya Main Is Ke Siwa Kuch Nahi

    Pal Main Jisse Chaha Usse Pal Main Bhula Diya
    Yeh Khel Hey Dunya Ka Is Ke Siwa Kuch Nahi

    Tum Ko Chaha Hey Magar Kuch Bhi Nahi Socha Ke
    Dunya To Hai Eik Sarab Is Ke Siwa Kuch Nahi ???

  20. mujhe ek baat samz nahi aati
    ke aap log eek msg roz kyun send kerte ho
    usse aadat thi |
    roz yehi padne ko milta hai
    kuch to naya likho yaar

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