khalid
Khalid
Yaad ro ro ke teri satati rahi
Aag judai ki dil ko jalati rahi
Aandhiyan jab guzarti rahi baagh se
Shakh-e- gul apne sar ko jhukaati rahi
Apni mohabbat ki nakaamiyan kya kahoon
Khwaish-e-ishq har kadam mujhe rulati rahi
Woh doosron se has has ke milte rahe
Meri he badkismati ashq bahati rahi
Ham wafa jinse karte rahe umar bhar
Hampe unki jafa muskurati rahi
Shayad kusur meri mohabbat ka he hai
Jo sab sehkar bhi unein chahti rahi (mkm)
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VAKAI ES POEM KO PADNE KE BAD MUJHE APNI VO MOHABAT YAD AA GAI JISNE MUJHE DHOKHA DIYA PAR DARD AB BHI BAHUT HOTA HAI
Alok Kumar
Shukriya mere dost itna khoobsurat comment karne ka
aur duaein dene ka. Bahaut khushi hui k aap yahan aaye
aur meri hausla afzai ki.
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Hr mod pe imtehan hai,ankho me chota sa jahan hai,dil? Dil ka mehman hai,Isq cheez nhi isq jaan hai.
Isq me to asq saath sath chalta hai khalid bhai,maine phli baar apke likhe nagmo ko padha hai,aur ye mujhe itni acchi lagi mai shabdo me ise bayan nahi kr sakta,bus yahi kh skta hu ki iswar apke hr dard ki dawa apko hasil karaye aur apko hr khusi de.
Aroobi
W/Salaam meri dost bahaut bahaut shukriya
commentdene ka.
Aik mamooli sa insaan hoon aur kuch nahin.
Seene mein dhair saara pyaar bhara hai
is liye
har koi pasand karta hai.
Visit karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya
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Assalaamu alikum,khalid. aap kaun hai?itne acche shayri kaise likhthe ho?main aap ke shayris ku bahuth pasand karti hoon.keep it up.Allah hafiz.
Hi Neetu
Shukriya dost yahan comment likhne
ka.Yeh to sach hai na ke dil se jo
nikalti hai wohi asar rakhti hai !!
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i really love ur shayaries..kya kahu bas itna keh skti hu ki dil ki aawaz hai jo labzoo me bayan ki gai hai……….
Hi Ruth
Bahaut accha laga yeh jaan kar ke
yeh shayari tumein pasand aay.Shukriya
apni raye dene ka.Umeed karta hoon ke
aainda bhi is site ko visit karti raho
gi.
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ap jo bhi hain ap ki shayari bohut achi lagi waikay ap ne dil se likhi hai
nice gazal
Khalid
Yaad ro ro ke teri satati rahi
Aag judai ki dil ko jalati rahi
Aandhiyan jab guzarti rahi baagh se
Shakh-e- gul apne sar ko jhukaati rahi
Apni mohabbat ki nakaamiyan kya kahoon
Khwaish-e-ishq har kadam mujhe rulati rahi
Woh doosron se has has ke milte rahe
Meri he badkismati ashq bahati rahi
Ham wafa jinse karte rahe umar bhar
Hampe unki jafa muskurati rahi
Shayad kusur meri mohabbat ka he hai
Jo sab sehkar bhi unein chahti rahi (mkm)
Krish
Thank you dost for your encouraging
words,please keep them comming!
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bahut khub hai ap ki yeh sayari,her ek labj me dum hai…..keep it up
thanks
Arshiya
Thank you so much for your kind
words.Please keep on commenting!
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Hi Amarjeet
Shukriya dost comment karne ka!
Aur zida khushi is baat ki hui
ke tum ne isse itni ghaur se padha
hai.
Lekan dost is mein main to apne aap
ko hi dosh de raha hoon kissi aur ko
to nahin.
“Yaad ro ro ke teri satati rahi
Aag judai ki dil ko jalati rahi
Shayad kusur meri mohabbat ka he hai
Jo sab sehkar bhi unein chahti rahi”
Nahin dost agar tumein aisa laga to
main maafi chahta hoon kiyonke main
kisi keemat par bhi kisi dost ko
naraaz nahin kar sakta.
I hope you understand!!!
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Wa ji, Tumne Kamal ki Shayari sunadi,
Hi Khalid……
achi ghazal hai…..
Sometimes things are not as easy as they seem…
Kya pta uski kya majboori hogi…..
Kya bewaja kisi ko bewafaa kehna…..
Yeh theek hai??
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Tamanna
W/Salaam meri achi si dost!Bas
aap sab doston ka pyar pa kar
aankhein bhar aati hain aur
sochne lagta hoon ke kya main
is ke kabil hoon? Aap doston ka
pyar he post karne pe majboor
kar deta hai.Waise bhi waqt to
kisi tarah kaatna he hai!
Tumhara,Amarjeet,Sweet,Imroz aur,
aur bahaut saare doston ka mashkoor
hoon jin ne is mushkil waqt mein
mujhe sahara diya hai.Allah aap sab
ki muradein puri kare…(Ameen)
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salaam khalid,
how r u frm frd…??
bahot acchi shayari hain m really happy
to see your posting again…seriously…
keep postong…
allah hafiz…
Bahooot khub khalid .