Khalid
Muddat se jis ke waaste Dil be qaraar tha
Woh laut kar na aaya magar intezaar tha
Jo humsafar tha chorr gaya raah main mujhe
Main phans gaya bhanwar main woh darya ke paar tha
Manzil qareeb aayi to tum door hogaye
Itna to tum batao ke yeh kaisa Pyaar tha
Chilman giradi yeh kis ne dono ke darmiyan
Na woh sakoon se betha na mujh ko qaraar tha
Yeh mukhtasar sa haal hai rukhsat ke waqt ka
Ankhon main aansu aur Dil beqaraar tha
Yeh baat umer bhar samjh na paaya main
Kyun Dil mera us ka talabgaar tha (mkm)
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khalid
Comments 34
very good really liked it
kya baat hai bhai, bahut accha laga padh kar. khuda aapko aur takat & mind de jisse ki tum aur accha likh sako
salam khalid bro, ur each poetry is awesome,keep it up….
and thank you very very much for sharing it with us.
May god bless you n may ur dreams come true…….
Thank you Rekha
I am so happy that you have enjoyed
this post.
Thank you for your appreciation!
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hi,
your poetry is excellent.
Aye mohabbat tere anjaam pe rona aaya,
Jaane kyun aaj tere naam pe rona aaya..
Yun to har shaam ummeedon me guzar jaati thi,
Aaj kuch baat hai, jo shaam pe rona aaya..
Kabhi taqdir ka maatam, kabhi duniya ka gila,
Manzil-e-ishq me har gaam pe rona aaya…
Jab hua zikr zamaane me mohabbat ka
Mujhko apne dil-e-bekaam pe rona aaya
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Avtar bahi
Shukriya aap ka ,jo shair aap ne
mere liye likha, bahut hi vadiya
hai bahut pasand aaya, balke aap
ki sari posting approve karne se
pehle mein achhi tarah par leta
hun aur phir approve karte hun aur
tab jaake wo different sections
mein jaati hai.Bas yahi arz hai ke
likhte rehna mere yaar!!!
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Hellow Khalid bhaiya,
Aap ke likhne ka tarika
la-jabab hai,bahut hi
umda likhte hein aap…
Aap ki shayari tarif-e-qaabil
hai…humein hamesha aap
ki nayi Nazmon ka intezar rehta hai
Pesh hai humari taraf se ap ke liye
chhota sa nazrana…..
Tujhe yaad karte hein ALLAH ke naam ke baad,
Kabhi subhah se pehle kabhi shaam ke baad,
Dil ki deewaro pe tera naam likhte hein,
Kabhi fursat mein to kabhi kaam ke baad..
Reema
You are very welcome Reema !
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Please stay in touch.
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Salaam Dreamy
I hope you are well!
Yes masha allah ramadan going very well
only few more days to go!
I know you dont have much time but
if you go to this link you will find
lots of poetry wich i have posted
and if you subscribe to it you will
receive an email every time a comment
is posted and you could read it in your
leasure.
Take care and Allah Hafiz!
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hi evry one! THANK YOU FOR RESPONSE KHALID
salaam
first thanx coz of yr early reply..thanx..actully i really intrestd in poems..and now sp.yr poems..so how is ramdan?actuly mere paas bahut vakt nahi hota he ki me poem read kar saku evryday 1 poem hi read kar skti hu..anywyz nice to read u..(..)happy
Hi Reema
I am very well how are you?
I hope you are enjoying reading
all the poetry that is posted on this
site!
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Wasalaam Dreamy
Hope you are well.
Yes this is based on experience and you
will find that it not only relates to me but
lots of other people in this world.
Dard to ab zindagi ka aik hissa hai!
Thank you for your comment,i realy
appreciate it!
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hi how r u all
hi
salaam
hi khalid…i like yr poem muddat se jiske vaste dil bekarar tha..mene bahut dil se use pari kya ye sach he i mean ye tumhari life ka sach he..isme bahut dard dikhta he..
Thank you Alok
for your comment.I am glad
that you have enjoyed it!
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simply amazing…..
Dard ki diwar par friyad likh karte hai har raat tanhai ko aabad kiya karte hai,aye khuda unhe jarur khush rakhna jinhe hum tujhse pahle yaar kiya karte hai……………..