Khalid
Main tere haath pe rach jaunga rangon ki tarah,
Tu mera naam kabhi haathon pe saja ke to dekh.
Main tere jism mein mehkunga gulabon ki tarah,
Aa kabhi mujhko dil mein basa ke to dekh.
Main tere lab pe chha jaunga muskarahat ki tarah,
Apne honton se mera naam bula ke to dekh.
Main teri aankh mein bas jaunga kajal ki tarah,
Tu meri yaad ka ek khawab saja ke to dekh.
Main bikhar jaunga chaar su khushion ki tarah,
Apne naam se mera naam mila ke to dekh!(mkm)
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Amarjeet
Thank you dost for your compliment!
Wellcome back!!!
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khalid.m@hotmail.co.uk
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Hii Khalid,
Bahut achi shayari hai…..
Love reading all your shayaris every time…
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hai doods, good yaar. i m impress to read ur shayari, write such type more shayari.
its very beautiful…seems u have a wonderful garden…beautiul…
Shukriya dosto apni rai pesh karne ka.
Especially to Tamanna.
By the way did you like the red rose
above the shayari?
Its from my own garden !
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salaam khalid,
bahot khoob dost…
“Main bikhar jaunga chaar su khushion ki tarah,
Apne naam se mera naam mila ke to dekh”
mashallah..bahot khubsurat hain dost….
Subhan allah
SO HAPPY
HAPPY
Imad Khan
W/salaam mere dost.Nice to hear from you
again.Aur aik aur baat tumein bataaon
mujhe koi burra nahin laga jo ke is
shayari pe comment kiya hai.
Lekan mere ache se dost,is baat ko samjhne
ki koshish karo ke line 3 aur 4 aapas
mein jurri hui hain yehni…
“Main tere jism mein mehkunga gulabon ki tarah
Aa kabhi mujhko dil mein basa ke to dekh.”
Dil ka taaluq khoon se hota hai aur khoon ka
jism se.Yehni agar jism mein khoon ho
to mehkne lagta hai,us mein jaan aajati hai
Sara chehra gulab ki tarah nazar aane lagta hai.
In dono lines ko baar baar padho mere dost
samajh aa jaye gi.
Any way thanks a lot for your interest!!
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Assalaamualekum KHALID SAHAB,
BOHOT khoob phir se aapne is site ke baagh me apne sher ka ek aur phool khila diya……. Bohot achha sher hai BADIYA……. Lekin agar 4th line yeh hoti
(AE KABHI MUJHE APNE SEENE SE LAGA KAR TOH DEKH)
YA…
(AE KABHI MUJHE APNI BAAHON ME LE KAR TOH DEKH)
Kyun ke is line ka matlab 3rd line se jura hua hai na kyun ke 3rd line keh rahi hai ke ( MAIN TERE JISM ME MEHKUNGA GULABON KI TARHA)
Toh jo line humne likhi hai na upar woh zyada suit karegi……….
Lekin hum aapki toheen nahi karna chahte…. Agar kiya ho toh maaf kar dijiyega is bande ko….. Lekin aapne jo likha hai woh badiya hai…
AAPKA DOST
IMAD KHAN