khuda karu tera shukriya ya karu fariyad
By Heeren Tanna on Nov 5, 2008 in Pallavi's Poems, Sad Shayari
Nahi samaj atta aj khuda karu tera shukriya ya karu fariyad
Diya tune jina ka bhahana aur phir kar diya muje barbad
Who ban jaye mera karti rahi dil mei yahi arzoo
Per kya pata tha ki tu kabhi bhi kar sakta hai muje azad
Aj tak teri har marzi per tera darbar mei sir jukaya mene
Teri har ha per ha kaha nahi mene, per aj to usse mat kar mujse durr
Karana hi hai agar usse muje juda to saath mei le lena who dadhkane meri jisime tha kabhi who basa
Kyoki uske na hone ki baad nahi ha manzil aur na hi rastha mera
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On Nov 6, 2008 at 02:50:10, Sweet said:
Salaam Khalid Ji
zabardast na, khass ye wali bit per aj to usse mat kar mujse durr
Karana hi hai agar usse muje juda to saath mei le lena who dadhkane meri jisime tha kabhi who basaKyoki uske na hone ki baad nahi ha manzil aur na hi rastha mera
bilkul sach hai aur bohto udas kar dehta hai kyun ke juda kyun hota hai koi pyar main waise pyar kiya to zaroori nahi ke wo pyar aap ko mile par khuda kasam pyar karne wale jo kabhi juda nahi hote bare khosh naseeb hote hain sach…..take care Sweet
On Nov 6, 2008 at 03:02:35, khalid said:
Thank you Sweet
Yeh posting waki bahaut khoobsurat hai
lekan yeh main ne nahi post ki.
Yeh sara credit mere dost Heeren ko jaata
hai.
Well done mere dost!
Welldone Heeren No dought its wonderfull
poetry.
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On Nov 6, 2008 at 12:18:56, hiren4u said:
HI dosto yaar yeh maine bhi nahi likhi .
yeh poem pallavi ji ne likhi hai jo is blog ki sabse purani author hai
yaha unki ek category bhi hai jaha sirf unhi ki poems post ki gayi hia
hers is the link http://www.love104.org/category/pallavi
On Nov 6, 2008 at 12:48:01, khalid said:
Aray yaar Heeren
Main ne kab kaha ke ye aap ne
likhi hai, main ne to kaha keh
yeh yahaan aap ne post ki hai,yeh?
Aur sunnao mere dost kaise hain aap?
Family sab theek hai na?
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On Nov 7, 2008 at 15:44:14, Amarjeet Kaur said:
Enjoyed reading this one…….
Very well written……
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On Jun 24, 2009 at 09:48:11, aman said:
Ache dost
On Mar 2, 2011 at 00:17:36, avnish shukla said:
dil ki baate dil sa