Comments on: Teray Dukhoon Ko Apni Taqdeer

By: Heeren Tanna

Heeren Tanna — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 06:40:08 +0000

HIi

nice one yar

By: Qamarsayeed

Qamarsayeed — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 01:43:52 +0000

Ab Ek meri qalam se nikli hui ghazal bhi bardash kar lijiye. . . Nawazish hogi. . .

chaman me bhul se koi to raazdar mile!
Koi to ho jo apne liye bhi beqarar mile!
Sitamgari to bahot hai jahaan me ae dost!
Kbi to teri nazar me mra khumar mile!
Zamaane walo ne samjha hai bewafa mujhko!
K phul boye the humne! Badal me khar mile
vo ek shakhs jisme chaah thi apni! ! !
Faqat wahi na mila! Log beshumaar mile
vo mera dost b hai aur jafakash bhi hai!
Uske dil me meri khatir kayi hisaar mile!
Mera qatil koi dushman ko samajta tha main
dhundhne nikla to raste me mere yaar mile!
Is bhari bheed mein main tanha hun qamar
k jb mila hai koi! Usko beqarar mile

By: Qamarsayeed

Qamarsayeed — Wed, 23 Sep 2009 01:38:32 +0000

Yaha kuch dino pehle kuch likh dia tha . . . Heeren tanna ka mujhe reply mila. . . Bahot achha laga . . . Thanks . . .

baat karnii mujhe mushkil kabhii aisii to na thii
jaisii ab hai terii mehfil kabhii aisii to na thii

le gayaa chhiin ke kaun aaj teraa sabr-o-qarar
be-qaraarii tujhe ai dil kabhii aisii to na thii

chashm-e-qaatil merii dushman thii
hamesha lekin
jaise ab ho gaâ€™ii qaatil kabhi aisi to na thi

By: Qamar sayeed

Qamar sayeed — Mon, 22 Jun 2009 08:28:03 +0000

Vo humse dur hote jarahe hai!
Bahut magroor hote jarahe hai!
Badal rahi hai dilo’n ki dunya!
Naye dastoor hote jarahe hai.
Kya sunega koi unke nagme!
Log be-soor hote jarahe hai.

By: khalid

khalid — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 21:41:25 +0000

Heeren

“Teray Gham Ki Shayed Kuch Tadbeer Mein Bana Loon”
Bahaut khoob dost.Bahaut achha laga yeh
line padh kar!
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