Masoom Mohabbat Ka Bas Itna Fasana Hai !!!

17 Comment(s)

1. On Oct 5, 2008 at 11:05:15, Rahul said:

   Hi I m Rahul Ur So Good

   Usne jo mera sath na diya
   shayad uski bhi koi majboori thi
   Bewafa to voh ho nahi sakte
   shayad meri mohabbat hi adhoori thi,

   Mazak udana aadat thi us ki
   bardasht karna fitrat thi humari
   aaina rakhte the hum bhi
   kyun ke be-lagam ghodon ko
   lagam dena fitrat thi humari,

2. On Oct 5, 2008 at 11:45:30, khalid said:

   Hi Rahul

   Thanks mere yaar!
   Appreciate your comment.
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   khalid.m@hotmail.co.uk
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3. On Oct 6, 2008 at 13:08:36, Amarjeet Kaur said:

   Khalid…..

   phir se bahut khoob likha hai……
   got to agree with Rahul…..
   u r too good…..

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   Neend bhi udaati hai…
   Chain bhi khota hai…
   Ishq mein aksar aisa hota hai…
   Khud se dur par dil k kareeb hota hai…
   Kismat vale hote hai woh…
   Jinhe sacha pyaar naseeb hota hai…

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4. On Oct 6, 2008 at 15:03:23, Mehul said:

   Mohabbat woh hai jo satati hai,
   Nazuk se dil ko tadpati hai,
   Karna na kabhi tum mohabbat kisi se,
   Kambkt ye woh hai..
   Jo haste logo ko rulati hai!

5. On Oct 6, 2008 at 16:49:55, khalid said:

   Amarjeet

   Thank you Amarjeet so nice of you
   to post a comment.By the way you
   i mean your poetry is not bad either!
   Punjabi section is full of your beautifull
   poetry.
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   khalid.m@hotmail.co.uk
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6. On Oct 6, 2008 at 20:43:57, Sweet said:

   WAKI I HAVE TO AGREE WITH YOU ALL THAT KHALID HAS VERY BEAUTIFUL POEMS…..JAB BHI LIKTE HO BOHOT ZABARDAST LIKTE HO…….YOU SHOULD BE PROUD NA…………..SWEET NA

7. On Oct 6, 2008 at 22:40:12, khalid said:

   Thank you Sweet

   Yes its because of you all that i feel
   so proud for writing such wonderfull
   comments.It is realy very encouraging
   to receive all these praises.Thank you
   once again!!!
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   khalid.m@hotmail.co.uk
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8. On Oct 13, 2008 at 03:11:13, rimjim said:

   arre khalid mere dost kya dost itne achee poems u rock man really so mujhe otni hindi tu nahi ati liken mera jo pyaar hai woh india se hai tu agar hosa ka tu can u pllzzz can u write a poem with the name sameer plz plz

9. On Oct 22, 2008 at 13:06:30, Savan shah said:

   Kisi bahane se vohi jara najadik mere aa bethe,
   dil darata hi raha ki ham nashe me kuch kar na bethe.
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   Agar jindagi ki rah me majabur na hote,
   tumhare karib hokar bhi tumashe dur na hote,
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   Na milane par khush the
   kabhi,
   bichad ne par naraj he
   aabhi.
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   .
   .
   Fakt aek yad pan thodak vasasho purati raheshe,
   nathi muki biji koi nishani joi to jaaoo.
   .
   .
   .
   Teoo kahi rahya che ke nhato hu bhan ma,
   samajavu aene kem ke hato tara dyan ma.
   .
   .
   .
   Meri aakho ko tere virah ka savan na mila,
   khusbhu ho jis me teri vo madhuvan na mila.
   Yu to har dar pe laharate najar aaye daman.
   Khichate naj se jisako vahi daman na mila…
   S A v A n S h A h
   gujarat

10. On Nov 29, 2008 at 01:59:35, hora said:

    Masoom mohabbat ka bas itna fasana hai
    Kagaz ki haveli hai baarish ka zamaana hai.
    Kya shart-e- mohabbat hai kya shart-e- zamaana hai
    Awaz bhi zakhmi hai aur geet bhi gana hai.
    Uss par uterne ki ummeed bahot kam hai
    Kashti bhi purani hai aur tufan ko bhi aana hai.
    Samjhe ya na samjhe wo andaaz mohabbat ke
    Ek shks ko aankho se dil ka sara dard sunana hai.
    Bholi si ada koi phir ishq ki zid par hai
    Phir aag ka dariya hai aur doob ke jana hai.

11. On Oct 23, 2009 at 16:06:51, Aftab Ansari said:

    Aiy dost tum mujhse aisi dosti banaye rakhna ki dekhne wale dang reh jaye,khoda bhi aake humse poche kya hum bhi tumhare dast ban jaye.

12. On Dec 18, 2010 at 14:44:56, faiyaz ali khan said:

    Dil Ameer par muqaddar gareeb tha.mil kar bichadna mera naseeb tha. chah kar bhi kuch kar na sake hum.ghar bhi jalta raha aur samandar bhi kareeb tha…..

13. On Dec 23, 2010 at 18:17:10, sachin said:

    Mohabbat woh hai jo satati hai,
    Nazuk se dil ko tadpati hai,
    Karna na kabhi tum mohabbat kisi se,
    Kambkt ye woh hai..
    Jo haste logo ko rulati hai!

14. On Dec 23, 2010 at 18:18:54, sachin said:

    woh hai jo satati hai,
    Nazuk se dil ko tadpati hai,
    Karna na kabhi tum mohabbat kisi se,
    Kambkt ye woh hai..
    Jo haste logo ko rulati hai!

15. On Dec 31, 2010 at 06:03:42, Abhishek said:

    waaaaaaaaaaa khalid tere likhne se laga k us zamane ka dard khinch gaya jahan kabhi ashko k samandar me jiya karte the

16. On Dec 31, 2010 at 19:50:02, khalid said:

    Abhishek

    Mujhe bahaut khushi hui mere dost ye jaan
    kar ke aap us samudar ko paar kar chuke ho.
    Lekan kabhi kabhi purane waqt ko yaad kar ke
    bahaut kuch seekha ja sakta hai.Kya khyal hai?
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    khalid.m@hotmail.co.uk
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17. On Mar 4, 2012 at 14:39:53, PAPOO said:

    BOHAT BURA INSAAN EK GUNAHGAR HAI HUM IS KABIL NAHI KE HUDA HUMAIN MILAIN.