Heeren Tanna
Khamosh raaho mein tera saath chahiye,
Tanha hai mera hath,tera haath chahiye,
Mujhko mere muqadar per itna yakeen too hai,
Tujhko bhi mere lafz, meri baat chahiye,
Mein khud apni shairi ko kiya ACHA kehta,
Mujhko teri tareef, teri daad chahiye,
Ehsaas-e-mohabbat tere waste hai lakin,
Junoon-e-ishk ko teri soghat chahiye,
Tu mujhko paane ki khuhaish rakhti ho lekin,
Jeene ke liye teri Mulaakat chahiye
Dost ke payar bhara peigam hai,
A to sabse khubsurat ka nam hai,
Aasu ke badle khusi dena iska kam hai,
Is majbut bandhn ko dill se salam hai.
nice
good yaar dil ko lag gaya
@Maithili
Wah aap ne sahi kaha aapka End mujhe bhi bahut accha laga
you could have written your end lines as :
Khamosh raaho mein tera saath chahiye,
Tanha hai mera hath,tera haath chahiye,
Mujhko mere muqadar per itna yakeen too hai,
Tujhko bhi mere lafz, meri baat chahiye,
Bus khuda se itni fariyaad krte hai hum
K marte dum tak bus tera sath chahiye………
but nywazzz dat too was a gr8 one…
Khamosh raaho mein tera saath chahiye,
Tanha hai mera hath,tera haath chahiye,
Mujhko mere muqadar per itna yakeen too hai,
Tujhko bhi mere lafz, meri baat chahiye,
Mein khud apni shairi ko kiya ACHA kehta,
Mujhko teri tareef, teri daad chahiy
very nice yaar it has touched my herat trulyyyyyyyyy.thanks 4 give that kind of msgsssssssss
my mo. sms
it is very awesome i never heard this kind of shaeri in my life thanx 2 show your feelings