Comments on: Gam-e-aashiqi

By: Rakesh saini

Rakesh saini — Fri, 30 Dec 2011 16:59:08 +0000

You are a great shayar i like you sir

faizan — Wed, 12 Oct 2011 13:45:14 +0000

wah yaar bhai kya to likh hai yaar

Deepak — Wed, 05 Oct 2011 04:07:07 +0000

hame koi Gam nahi tha Gam-e-aashiqi se pehle
na thi dushmani kisi se teri dosti se pehle

hai ye meri badnasibi tera kya qasur is mein
tere gam ne mar dala mujhe zindagi se pehle

mera pyaar jal raha hai ai chand aaj chup ja
kabhi pyaar tha hame bhi teri chandni se pehle

main kabhi na muskurata jo mujhe ye ilm hota
ki hazaron gam milenge mujhe ek khushi se pehle

ye ajib imtehaan hai ki tumhi ko bhulana hai
mile kab the is tarha hum tumhe be-dili se pehle

Bipin — Fri, 15 Apr 2011 11:21:36 +0000

kya khub lakteho janab

Anil Lakhera — Thu, 19 Aug 2010 16:43:01 +0000

bahut acha likha he
i love this line sech he ye

harish kumar — Tue, 03 Feb 2009 18:11:01 +0000

hiiiiiiii how r u??

Nia — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 09:50:27 +0000

Khalid
kho gaya jo usey dhoond k laaoon kaise
laapaton ka pata sabko bataoon kaise

woh toh kehti hai chalo saath safar karte hain
saath chalta hoon magar saath nibhaoon kaise

meray alfaaz mein woh apni ghazal kaise kahein?
apni aankhon se ussey khwab dikhaoon kaise

woh jo hoti toh har roz jashan sa hota
uske jaane pe ab eid manaoon kaise

tu meri yaad mein har roz chali aati hai
sochta hoon main teri yaad mein aaoon kaise

kab se aangan mein bahaarein nahi aayee hain
khushi k phoolon se main ghar ko sajaoon kaise

jhoot sun-nay ke aadi hain mere sheher k log
kyun kahoon such aur unko rulaaoon kaise

dil jo roothay toh teri yaad mana leti thi
yaad roothi hai ab isko manaoon kaise

Jaanu — Mon, 14 Jul 2008 10:45:11 +0000

Mai ye apki wajah se padha thanx ali 09889111039

Bekasoor — Fri, 11 Jul 2008 13:48:43 +0000

kuch bhi juban se kisi ke to nikli hai

allan — Mon, 07 Jul 2008 07:50:12 +0000

ghanta………….chori ki shayari hain yeh to